Connor’s diary writing as Lucy from The Lion, the Witch and the Wardrobe

There is some lovely vocabulary in here, listen carefully!

 

 

Which bit do you like best and why?

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2 thoughts on “Connor’s diary writing as Lucy from The Lion, the Witch and the Wardrobe

  1. Hi Connor, I liked your description of the journey and I thought that you captured evacuee’s feelings really well. It made me feel sad to think that Dad couldn’t save the children. You made Narnia sound like a place full of wonder and I really wanted to hear more 🙂

  2. Connor, I felt I went on this journey with you and the other evacuees; you conveyed the sadness and feelings of uncertainty that the children must have been going through. Then you introduced the wonder of Narnia which was quickly replaced by fear of the unknown. Well done.

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