Millie’s setting discription of Naboo

The beautiful landscape has a lovely blue waterfall and shinny water. The stunning lake goes through the planet with the blazing sun shinning on it. As the baby blue water stays in a giant hole in the ground,it sparkles happily all day for a 100 years.

The stunning mountains sit there in the background doing what they do best,being beautiful. As the green grass mountains stand there with joy, emerald green grass grows and grows!

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3 thoughts on “Millie’s setting discription of Naboo

  1. Millie,

    You have thought carefully about your description and used some adventurous vocabulary as well as using complex sentences. Remember that we don’t want every sentence in a piece of writing to be complex though – variety is what we’re looking for! We were also writing our setting descriptions in 1st person so you should have use ‘I’ or ‘we’.

  2. I loved your description Millie, but wondered how you knew it would be sparkling for 100 years? My favourite phrase is ‘ The stunning mountains sit there in the background doing what they do best,being beautiful.’ I liked it because you used lots of stunning adjectives!!! 🙂
    😉

  3. Amazing words especially landscape because it was lovely.
    It was very interesting especially during the bit about the stunning
    Mountains.

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