Mohsin 5MH L.O: To know how to select appropriate vocab.

Titanic sinking poem.

Lives lost,

and souls gone,

everybody’s time has come.

People perished,

in the sea,

horrific sights are all we see.

In the Arctic,

brisk and bleak,

everyone in a deathly sleep.

Titanic sinking,

all dead,

not even one cozy bed.

bodies floating,

in the sight,

everybody in a fright.

God,

forgive us for sins,

please don’t let us die like this.

By Mohsin Murtaza 5MH

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7 thoughts on “Mohsin 5MH L.O: To know how to select appropriate vocab.

  1. I enjoyed your poem Mohsin. Some great vocabulary in here including ‘perished’ and ‘cosy’. Check your spelling of the word ‘cosy’!

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