Ryder
Darth Sidious is a man, he has grey hair, he is quite old and he wear a brown cloak. He looks scary, he is wrinkle and his eyes are yellow. He is constantly angry and he never smiles.
As he soars through the air fighting his enemies he flips and spins over things. He walks like an average man but he sometimes walks faster. Even though Darth Sidious is old he walks like a young boy.
His personality is a mean and rude person,he is a horrible man that intends to kill anyone who fights him. He’s known as the cloaked figure because he never shows his face and he wears a cloak.
Darth Sidious has a clear and deep voice that everybody can hear, his voice always sounds like he’s angry. he sometimes shouts at people in anger. His voice changes from a high pitch sound to a low pitch sound.
CHPS Years 5 & 6 
I really like the way you talked about him never revealing his face. You could improve your writing by making sense e.g Darth Sidious is a man, he has grey hair, he is quite old and he wear a brown cloak.
Michael